In this
passage “How Your Birth Order Influences Your Life Adjustment,” by Lucille
Forer there are several reason why a child feels a certain way being in his or
her family. The child would know his or position in the family for example
being, only child, oldest, middle, or the youngest in his family. The oldest
child would feel that he or she have more responsibilities than the younger
siblings. The middle child may assumed of being better than other people
because the middle child is older than the younger and has its older sibling
and parents for help. The youngest child would have a lower self-esteem because
he or she feels that they can’t accomplish than his siblings. Finally the only
child would assume of being independent for himself.
Being the
oldest in my family I agreed with this idea. As being the oldest I feel that I have
a lot of responsibility of being the role model for my younger brothers. In my
experience I have to face my parents as being the leader of my brothers. My parents
expect me to do the right thing so my brothers would look up to me. I also need
to take care of my brother’s problem and set a good example of being the
oldest.
I have
two younger brothers named Jose and Albert. Jose is 18 teen years old and he is
the middle. I do feel that he thinks he is the best because he always mocks
Albert. Jose likes to argue a lot of being the best and most of the time fights
with Albert. He usually ask me for help and if I can’t help him he would ask my
parents.
My
youngest brother Albert is 16 teen he most of the time wines a lot of not doing
his homework right. I do feel that he needs a lot of attention because he feels
very self-esteem moist of the time. My parents tend to spoiled him and order me
to help him for his problems. I feel Albert is lucky to be the youngest because
he has a lot of people to watch out for him. Sometime when I have a lot of
problems or being stress out I sometimes wish of being the youngest.
I do
appreciate of having brothers I feel bad for an only child because when their
parents are gone they are by themselves in this world.
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